AlloyAnimations's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Retail Experience]

for what it is

its okay, its not bad and the idea is good from experience lol,
kill the drifty moving and unthought out hand changes. also when he talks about erasers his expressions never change.. mouth changes and hand movements are nothing. remember as an animator, the most key things are:
facial expression
body language
and hand motionjavascript:submission_controlle r.GetReviewController().SaveReview();

[Simple Tests]

simple enough

simple fix, kill the spinning fans in the first shot, they are too much of a distraction as well as dont fit the art style of everything else.
also the animation was pretty good, but i would say if your going to have stills that close to the screen have em move a little or have thicker lines so we can establish the depth.